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[ As the storm moves in ]

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As the storm moves in

I sit here alone in the cemetery

Perched uopn a headstone thinkin

As the thunder rolls in the distance

I see the lighting flash bright

 

The rain begins to pour

I sit solemnly there amongst the dead

With so many thoughts runnign through my head

 

As my thoughts bring tears

The rain hides them

As the storm seems to worsen with my mood

And all of this all falls back to you

 

Sitting here in the rain

My memories flood back to me

I close my eyes and i see your face

As the wind blows i feel your hair in my face

Even through the tears and rain

I can still taste you on my lips

 

I can remember every inch of your body

I remember how soft your touch was

And as al these memoires beat down on me

Like the cold rain

I feel something slip within my soul

And as i start to walk away from my perch

I feel my heart break once again

But as the strom fades so do I

 

I fade away into nothing without you here

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I dont care if this sounds jaded or what ever you want to say this is from my heart to someone who i lost

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  • ShadyLass
    November 11, 2007

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    This doesn't sound jaded at all. In fact I can tell it's from your heart. I just lost my grandma to lung cancer that spread to her brain so in a way I can relate to this.
    ~Amanda~