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I Wanted To Tell You




That was then,
we're in the now.
Back when,
I should've told you how....
I felt about you.
My fears,
my inner feelings.
I wanted you to heal me.
To tell me I wasn't crazy.
That things would run its course.
My desires,
the flames that jumped
for you.
My heart would beat loud
when you were near.
It's funny though,
you didn't hear.
Back when,
I should've mentioned how....
That was then,
because we're in the now.



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  • heart and soul
    August 27, 2007

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    i like it....passionit yet simple. You get your feelings and point across really well. Keep on writing and never forget you can feel...