Sports Car

The wind slashes across
my face as I try to
race against it

Just recently my skin turned
from plain ol' white
to the great passionate red

We often compete with other skins
to show off what we can do
with our shinny bodies

Many of us with different
colors of skin race to and fro
without the thought of turning back

A competition to see who reaches
the end of the race first
who will it be...?

Why ME of course!!

A contest entry

Ages 13 & Under ONLY ~ Creative Thinking by Amunet Wolfbane. 525 points, ended September 1, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Round 1: Hit me With your Best Pre-write. by edit my world.. 425 points, ended October 20, 2007, 64 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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BethanyBoo
August 31, 2007

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This is a good poem. i liek sports cars as well. i think this is clever and fun.

love from your friend the frog xx
babyitsyou
August 17, 2007

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oh you're so good!!!!
and to top it of your younger than me
hahahaha well yah much luck with the contest
i really liked the end of the poem
badddgirl
August 16, 2007
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that is selfish yet funny..........................