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Miracle Grow

Painless
Process-
Shapeless
Greatness-
Just as such a painless process shows,
Love's garden of shapeless greatness grows.

Author notes

This is a style poem call a tyburn.
Tyburn is a 6 line poem.
2 syllables for the first four lines that all rhyme.
In line 5 lines 1 and 2 are repeated as syllables 5-8.
Line 6 has lines 3 and 4 repeated in it's 5th through 8th syllables.
I hope you like my poem about the growth of love, and may be inspired to write your own tyburn...keep the poetry alive...
Peace and Love...

Lost

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Comments


  • StarvingAuthor
    August 16, 2007
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    sigh.
    cute but...
    eh.
  • HaleyMary
    August 16, 2007

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    Cool write. I don't think I've read a tyburn style before. This poem had a good flow. Keep up the good work.


    • lostinawe.
      August 16, 2007
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      thanks

      I like the style alot...plan on writing a few this way....
      If you get the chance check out my poem immortal....
      It's probably the second or third hardest poem that i've tried to write...
      It turned out fair though and I want to write others when the time allows.
      I appreciate your comments.
      I hope to keep reading them as well.
      thank you so much...
      Peace and love...
      Lost