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          Glittering mirror,
          Broken by falling petals,
          How fragile life is!

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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    August 18, 2007

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    Superb

    Excellent! what more can be said than excellent! this is an all round very well penned Jaiku poem. I absolutely love it! Very well done and all round excellent!