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Losing Touch

I sit down here
A pen in one hand
My heart in the other,
And I can’t find a way,
Can’t find the words
To link the two.

I used to be so eloquent
Putting feelings into words
But now I just feel so lost
As my pen stills
On the blank paper
That’s become my enemy.

I’ve got these emotions inside
Locked up so far down
And I don’t know how
When, or why I lost contact
But I want it back
Before I lose myself.

I feel like I’m in a labyrinth
Chilled to the bone
Watching the leaves
Become bitten with frost
Before I realize, that right there
Is my own doing.

Passion, love, embrace
All are words in a foreign tongue
Paint me a picture of these words
So I can reach out
And touch the warmth
Again.

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  • bookaddict -SYV-
    August 19, 2007
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    Lovely poem, especially for one bemoaning a lack of eloquence.


  • bragaly224
    August 16, 2007
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    Hi, my name is Bragaly224 and you have been Nominated for the Best Personal Poem of the Month Award. Basically, I will choose the best poem of the month from selected categories, and the winner will receive points or something else. To accept this nomination, message or comment me saying that you accept.

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    • Zsadist Gates
      August 26, 2007
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      Oh wow. Um, I don't know what to say. Thank you! I most definitely accept!


  • micol
    August 16, 2007

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    Minimalist that I sometimes am, it seems that the first stanza IS the poem--everything else follows from that remarkable image of pen and heart.