Kiss Me:
Kiss me like the summer tide
Smashing against the auburn rocks.
Kiss me like the dew fallen weeds
Scratching across the sides of a barn.
Kiss me like an august morning sunrise
Reverberating through the endless sky.
Kiss me like the windswept pines
Bowing in awe at the lumbering mountains.
Kiss me like tomorrow was today.
Kiss me like you were not afraid.
Kiss me like we know who we are.
Kiss me as I wish upon a star.
~08/16/07~
A contest entry
- Beautiful ambitions by crazibunni.
600 points, ended February 11, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this was really sweet, I myself enjoy kisses from my dear sweetheart...sometimes it's easier to show how u feel with a kiss...good luck with the contest!
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Ausome
This is a good write and you came up with a lot of things about a kiss that is Ausome... I bet your girl loved it keep on writing and reading... I hope that you read some of mine....
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haha, i am leaving you a message using your account! Ok well luffles!
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Ah, the girlfriend must be thrilled. :]
This is adorable. Good write. -
I LUFFLES YOU!
Aww baby, this made me feel all warm and fuzzy. Ok I normally don't like poems that repeat but it works for this poem. I absolutely love the similes that you came up with to discribe a kiss but what I love more is that it is my kiss! Yay....
Love you always
Hill
p.s- what did you wish?
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WOW! that's all i can say! this is like REALLY REALLY GOOD I loved it.....i know this sounds weird but i licked my lips after reading this. Great write! u deserve a three!
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Wow.
My lips were wet just reading this. The elaboration itself made it a perfect read. Good Job!
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