Cooling metal tick
Thermostat click
Soft slip of tear
Scritch in fired wood
Thunk of heart
Gone but not forgotten
In a list
A contest entry
- My turn to PIF by poetryality.
875 points, ended August 17, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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ty< Renee, this was a very different one for me...few words and sharply so. tks for the bronze.
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This is quite beautiful! The use of language is stellar. This is indeed a sorrowful poem. I can see and feel these words. Your take on the prompt is excellent.
Thank you for this entry. Sorry about the time that elapsed before judging. I had errands that took longer than anticipated. I wish you the best.
Much LOVE ♥
Renee
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Sorrow shared as only you know how, M'dear.
~ Nicholas
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and it is ok to share it...as long as I don't get all maudlin..bonk me on the head if I ever do so
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"Soft slip of tear
Scritch in fired wood"
Sighhh...Ohhh, Sweetie...I know the feeling of these ashes...Good luck in Renee's contest, my dear Friend...I'm so proud of you... Wanda
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and I am proud of you....yer duh best!
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beautiful imagery good luck in the contest
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ty, celtic angel. I msut come and read the entries...
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heartwood burning in the hearth...sad is this one...
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ty wolfspiritguide..I have missed you
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