fierce
fly wings,
of angels singing
halos circle tears below
in beaming light,
facet flavored
cool as frosted winter snow
A contest entry
- My turn to PIF by poetryality.
875 points, ended August 17, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I still love the little ones! hey you're pretty small too!
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Yes, angels do cry. There is so much that they look upon that is hurtful in the world. The alabaster angel is a perfect graphic to go with these words. You did well with the prompt. Too bad the angels can't laugh and sing the day away.
Thank you for this entry. Sorry about the time that elapsed before judging. I had errands that took longer than anticipated. I wish you the best.
Much LOVE ♥
Renee
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well written and the tearful angel is an awesome sculpture at adds to the feeling of sadness.
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Very beautiful poem excellent take on the prompt
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Prompt: "Everything Cries"
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