She submits
Slowly laying on my exposed frame
Hot, steaming from the breeze from the open window
For all to see her naked beauty
Our lips embrace as she pulls me deeper with her
Her vulva taste sweet
As her moaning turns to low throated demands
“Suck it hard”
Her nails pinch droplets from my neck as I inhale
Her sex
Spinning like two figures in Cirque du Soleil,
She guides me to her hot pulsating sex
She controls me
Owns me
Like no other
Her hand finds my face with violence
I shudder
With excitement,
“Faster”
She growls with authority
My hands find her throat as we squeeze
To enhance her intensity of her climax
Sliding in and out of her I feel her juices flow down my thighs
She screams out with a passionate plea
For more
And more
Until she marks my body for the infinite time
I image eyes from the open window, lusting at my back
I refocus
And squeeze tighter until she falls limp within my arms
Weakly she pushes me between her
To soothe her aching spot
As I faintly succumb to the will of my mistress
In a list
A contest entry
- Red Hot Heaven by raingoddess.
900 points, ended August 30, 2007, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - High Passions by Sinfully Yours.
400 points, ended October 5, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Looking for a AP LOVER for Onesugar...MEN ONLY by Ephiphany.
500 points, ended October 26, 2007, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Now that is an incredibly hot vision. Submission to the will of Mistress, what a way to worship. Wonderful write, you've earned the shiny medals on this one.
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thank U so much
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HOT HOT HOT HOT
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thx
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Still a HOT piece, Michael
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I can clearly see why you won 2 golds for this hot piece. This is some great writing, Very talented, you should be proud. I enjoyed this a lot.
loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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thank U. A little more graphic than what I usually do but the contest called for more. Thanks again
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Whew.....
this was on point, wonderful entry...Thank YOU!
Finally some competition....wow
ephiphany
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People need to step up and not just throw anything into this contest
I hate lazy writing.
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Like the writing...not sure about the subject
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Very nicely written and a well deserved Gold I see. You did a fantastic job here on this poem.....Scott
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Very nice. Steamy and hot. Very strong and intrusive poem that takes over the senses. Great job!
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appreciate that - this was for a friend. She experiments so I wanted to show her some options ~ Thanks ~ MYkeee
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Very seductive indeed, I invisoned this and it played like my favorite porno. Very good description and incredible flow. Congrats on the well deserved Gold.
Take Care,
Silvos.
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Thanks - I keep a collection close by - thx Mykeee
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very steamy love! this was a hot steam bath read here i was very impressed and glad to get a sneak peak of seeing if you guys are participating and you all are thanks
Mrs. Lady enthralling
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Very hot and steamy. Well deserving gold trophy. The imagery was vivid and detailed. Still can't think. Well it was just HOT.
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LOL!!! thanks it was fun and I had to keep the heat at full blast!!
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Cold shower anyone? HOT HOT HOT! Fantastic sexy write which left me breathless. Good luck with your entry!
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Hey...warn a girl...lol This was steamy and hot, hot, hot.. I felt like I was looking in that window..
My screen fogged up..lol. Good job my friend...
Good luck in the contest.
Soulful Woman
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Now this sure is one Angel with horns, you have done a great job here, thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
raingoddess
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This truly some red hot stuff, you have wrote here..I just loved the edrotic air it gave me as the reader......I hope you win gold ......novyr
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He smiles with the satisfaction of well placed arrow. BONG!!! THANK U, I had to do something special 4 Rain, thanks for the kind words ~ as long as it moves folks, i'm good ......mykey
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