Blue calm, shimmering sun
bronze tears trickling, mirror
shattered dull satin petals
droplets of hearts rain, shower
vibrant garden forgot
Author notes
prompt everything cries
A contest entry
- My turn to PIF by poetryality.
875 points, ended August 17, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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nicely done and what a beautiful jpg......
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I am sure the tears of the forgotten are unseen. Most times we cry in seclusion, and/or isolation. There is a sadness to these words. There is also beauty in the words you chose to use to write this poem. The metaphor is great. Your take on the prompt is excellent!
Thank you for this entry. Sorry about the time that elapsed before judging. I had errands that took longer than anticipated. I wish you the best.
Much LOVE ♥
Renee
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Aww that is amazingly beautiful take on the prompt.Goodluck in the contest and best wishes to you.
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Thankyou so much for such a wonderful comment
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such a beautiful metaphor, hearts and deadened flowers...lovely and sad...
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thank you so much for such a beautiful comment
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Prompt: "Everything Cries"
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