Hear my chasm.
This canyon screams
thunder's voice,
craving love
to kiss my body,
in Mother's arms
of quiet holding.
A contest entry
- My turn to PIF by poetryality.
875 points, ended August 17, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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"Hear my chasm.
This canyon screams
thunder's voice"
Wow...I hear you, my Friend, loud & clear...such a wild whisper, Scribe...Congratulations on winning gold from Renee, Sweetie...
Wanda
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What is this?!! Magic?! Your words and imagery and poetry and everything, you are a mini-God. Really you are...
Candy
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Wow, what a starter line...you had me from hello!
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Your first two words bellow to the reader. I hear the voice loud and clear. There are those of us who do cry for love. This is excellent! Your take on the prompt is quite unique.
Thank you for this entry. Sorry about the time that elapsed before judging. I had errands that took longer than anticipated. I wish you the best.
Much LOVE ♥
Renee
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i gotta run but i'm sure this will be great...it's pretty good with just the 'm'...
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Prompt: "Everything Cries"
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