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Everything Cries

No longer is life bright and gay
There is no difference betweenn night and day
It's no surprise, everything cries.

A contest entry

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  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    August 17, 2007

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    Another win, another day in the life of Billbard. Congratulations and keep writing! My favorite line is the last.


  • poetryality silver member
    August 16, 2007

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    This is whimsical, and almost reminds me of a jingle. Sorry you missed the contest page that asked not to use the prompt as your title or in the poem. Even with that this is a clever writ.

    Thank you for this entry. Sorry about the time that elapsed before judging. I had errands that took longer than anticipated. I wish you the best.

    Much LOVE ♥

    Renee

  • poetryality silver member
    August 16, 2007
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    Prompt: "Everything Cries"