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Blessed Light

 

deeper than a vein of Gold,

in touch

with Mother's breast sublime

 

lies treasure richer than a breath

exhaled in leaf

and hoary vine

 

where love of place

and peace of heart

flies shy of sky

in fragrant view

 

of tender touch

where feathers fall,

upon a field of grassy dew

 

and taste does shimmer

light on skin,

to tingle aftershock in bear

of footsteps laden lift, upheld

in cleaner cross of air

 

 

I linger long

in look profound,

where on such face

the sun does melt

 

in facets unrefined as time

to call much ancient heat to drown,

a stone in mock relief

 

reflections of solid beauty grow,

blown bubbles bathed in glass;

to crack

on misted bounty's truth,

unseen as dreams renewed

 

 

I fear to tread and spoil this hand

 

for even though

with love I wing

unending circles,

in jealous clouds

 

to touch this path

with clumsy reach

would mar and stain,

perfections breach

 

and so with heavy dread I stand

afar

and bear my senses lofty flight,

as care, with nary a billowed breath

 

to stir the sanctity of Blessed light

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Desire gold member
    August 21, 2007

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    Magnificent!!

    Love the Journey You take the reader Sweet One
    Beautiful images to soothe the senses~

    Congratulations on Your HM
    ~*~
    reflections of solid beauty grow,
    blown bubbles bathed in glass;
    to crack
    on misted bounty's truth,
    unseen as dreams renewed
    ~*~
    Thank You for sharing this!!


    Many blessings to You
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    August 17, 2007
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    I have stood at such a palce that it felt my very presence smudged the scene...beautifully done!!!!


  • kaibab silver member
    August 17, 2007

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    In this catherdarl of star to shimmer
    ceiling's face in glittered dream
    of quaver pulsing pant in purity
    we scratch our words, forever inking...

    such a lovely entry...a tough one this is


  • omega13
    August 17, 2007

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    That was absolutely breathtaking, Every time you write one of these it reminds me of that day you were carrying around that beetle and protecting it.


  • poet2angels gold member
    August 17, 2007

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    beautiful!!!
    This is really amazing....You should be proud...Rich will love this one

    Lynda


  • tara wilson gold member
    August 16, 2007

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    "for even though
    with love I wing
    unending circles,
    in jealous clouds
    to touch this path
    with clumsy reach
    would mar and stain,
    perfections breach."

    "and so with heavy dread I stand
    afar
    and bear my senses lofty flight,"

    I sure have missed your poetry,
    this is excellent





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