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Springs Of Heaven

Life flows as saline
from springs of Heaven,
splashing dew onto
fragrant petals;

and tasting salt
on cheeks of glory

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  • Tirrell
    August 17, 2007
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    Beautiful imagry,
    like the general mood of this.
    well penned!


  • poetryality silver member
    August 16, 2007
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    Somber and quite beautiful is this minimal poem. Very nicely written, and an excellent take on the prompt. I like that you used Life as your metaphor.

    Thank you for this entry. Sorry about the time that elapsed before judging. I had errands that took longer than anticipated. I wish you the best.

    Much LOVE ♥

    Renee

  • poetryality silver member
    August 16, 2007
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    Prompt: "Everything Cries"