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Heart and Soul Broken

I look at you from outside,
hoping for some peace this time.
I know for you have tried,
that you are not coming back,
because you never called.
You never even wrote me a letter.
I wish you had, you see,
that way, I could know you better.

The next time I fall in love,
I will not fall in love with an asshole,
because you left me in the rain,
and I lost my heart and soul.

I can't believe you did this to me,
because I completely believed you.
I wish you would stop peskering me,
because I can't hardly stand you.
Now, I am by myself, talking,
all you seem to be doing is stalking.

Get the fuck out of my life,
because you need your own.
If you only would leave me alone,
I would finally regain some soul.

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This is fictional, but I wrote it according to TV reports, movies and other poets on this site. I hope you enjoy it.

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  • Heavens Child
    August 16, 2007

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    Ah...sigh.... love can be so painful, and you've done an excellent job portraying the emotions. I never would have thought this was fictional, because you bring the feelings to life.

  • Pyper Rain
    August 16, 2007

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    Thank goodness this is fictional, it is a very scary thing. Nice job, you have expressed it well.

    ~Pyper