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Believin

Hey baby i want to talk to you
want to make you understand
I'd do anything to have you
be all that i can.

I've got so much love to give
so much of my soul
if only you'd give me a chance
I've got it all.

I know i'm not perfect
I dont believe in that
but everyone has their magic
baby dont you believe in that.

Just give me a sign
something i can go on
make me smile baby
knowin that you believe in me.

I know it's hard to be trustin
I've been there before
Just put your heart out there for me
it wont be hurtin anymore.

Please tell me what you think

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  • poppa
    January 17, 2008

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    Hi again..... this touched a nerve with me, Im a caring soul and just cant seem to find the one......makes me just want to reach out and hug ya ....


  • Puppydog gold member
    October 25, 2007

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    A WONDERFUL REACHING OUT OF YOUR HEART!!!!

    One must always keep reaching out to another, others do find it hard to open up their hearts oh how well I know this


  • Painful Expressions
    August 29, 2007
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    Well Penned

    Glad to see you taking part in life again. Love your writting hope to see more in the days to come. love ya kiddo have a great week.


  • zt
    August 28, 2007

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    This reads like song lyrics to me. All you need is a catchy refrain and some music! It feels like it is written from your heart. I wish you luck in convincing this person to give you a chance...

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