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[ Looking out to sea ]

Looking out to sea
she conducts the waves like an orchestra
with careful movements of her slender hands
pulls the storm closer
mixing sea spray with rain
blending the timpani and winds

a goddess in blue
everything swirls around her
bringing music to those
who have sufferred too long in silence

Author notes

For some reason, the picture inspired me to think of someone conducting the storm, very The Tempest .

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  • Arthuris
    December 19, 2007

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    Enchanting

    I am left wondering who these suffering people are. Surely this goddess in blue brings magic with her.

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    August 16, 2007
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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, Josephine