This must be heaven?
With the crystal clear pools of water mirroring my soul.
Beautiful skies of illuminating new life.
Calling my spirit to enter the brilliant light.
A spiritual and calming atmosphere.
Tranquil place of love and magic, with colors of passionate hues.
Burgundies with a hint of pink, chestnut with a melon shine.
Soulful white Orchids with fragrance of a heavenly dream.
Pure flowing water blessing my soul for an eternity.
You will never want to return to life.
Accepting death as a place of great sensation.
No worries, no hate, no tears just eternal bliss.
The most beautiful place you’ve ever dreamed.
This must be heaven?
Please tell me what you think
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That was so lovely on the eyes and on the mind.....You obviously have a stunning gift and talent. The words here left a wonderfull image and vision..........It emanates with positivity and higher creativity......keep it up!
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Honestly Enchanting Write!
Again you have written with openness of soul, as it has spilled upon the page, like a dulcet summer day, amid the hope of a life eternal... Your imagery, is profoundly on cue, and is nothing short of amazing, I just love the way that you drive home, your love for life, and your hope for the future heavens rest eternal... Your craft is certainly polished to a glorious shine here, and you should hold this up to yourself, with an even pride! Way to go! I am off to read you more!
~ James ~
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No worries, no hate, no tears just eternal bliss.
The most beautiful place you’ve ever dreamed.
This must be heaven?
Hey Indeed you are so true..it is a beautiful scenario..and you have portaryed it so beautifully as well..The depth of the picture have been shown properly through the deep verse by you..You did a wonderful job here..
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My darling Lisa,
the only thing that is missing is you and I sitting in the middle of the gazebo, our feet propped up on a yellow wagon.
Then, truly, this would be Heaven!
I love you,
Brazos
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This is awesome! A place that we all search to find in our lives. Thanks a lot for sharing this beautiful and well written piece here. I love the imagery and feeling of it. Well done my friend and keep it up!
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How soothing was this? Yes such a heavenly feel to this one. Nicely done. You captured the image
and made it your own. ~ Lovely ~ Mykeee
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Me, I got to have a place to run and play be silly with someone and time to create stuff. lots of stuff. Sounds beautiful. I can see why many are drawn.
Love Tom B.
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this is heaven. i want say it otherwise i never even dreamed of feeling a sense of tranquility like i am feeling after this. its like you brought medicine to the group soul now this is how you take care family
nice job
sxy99
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This is heaven
A beautiful place of peace and tranquility
with no worries, no hate, and no fears
Very uplifting a pleasure to read
Love ~sugar~
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What a wonderful photo...beautiful imagery all thru this sis....great write and thanks for sharing this.
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Thank you sis this must be heaven right
Much love I have missed you all these days
LISA
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Thank you sis this must be heaven right
Much love I have missed you all these days
LISA
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lovely! I love the spiritual quality and descriptions!
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How beautiful a spirit you have. Love Love Love it!!!
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Awesome
I love this. Excellent job!!
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Wow
Man this is very uh, not even sure what the correct word would be.
I love it!
I am so scared of dying, this is such a beautiful thing to look forward to.
Thank you very much.
No worries, no hate, no tears just eternal bliss.
The most beautiful place you’ve ever dreamed.
This must be heaven?
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