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Sirius Black

As a dog, Padfoot is his name,
As a human, they call him Sirius.
They thought he was Evil at first
But Good it turned out he was
As he fell beyond the veil,
We all sobbed for it to be not true
But he is now gone from us,
Sirius, we love you.

For Sirius.

Author notes

Callienne Taren requested this one also, and I had to write it immediately. I cried like a baby at this part in the book. *tear*

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  • LadyJuliet
    November 18, 2007

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    It seems like you could have gotten a lot deeper in this piece. Sirius is a deep guy! It seemed a little shallow. It only deals with the superficial. I would try to incorporate more. Emotions and imagery and metaphore are your friends.

    But I still loved it. And I loved Sirius. Really, I get why he had to die, but honestly, I think Rowling could have given him a more dignified death. Seriously, ge was killed by a curtain. I didn't believe it when he died because it was that rediculious. I was laughing that Remus was being so stupid because Sirius COULDN'T be dead. Siriously, how can someone get killed by a curtain? I didn't set in untill the second time I read the book. Then I really cried. But I couldn't cry in the movie though because Gary Oldman is so so so not Sirius to me.

    Wow... That all was really off topic. But in any case, good write.
    *Juliet


  • Faeryn
    August 16, 2007

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    Though the Order of the Pheonix movie brought back my unshed tears over the loss of this character, this is so sad. Rest in Peace Sirius, we all loved you. (Except Bellatrix)