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To My Ap Daughter's Beau~ (CARSTON)

I'm so thrilled,
you have found a special someone
to carry your burdens.

As well as to embrace,
such loving words you weave.

To your beau...

I pray he never stops loving you,
as you appreciate him
may compassion rule your worlds.

No matter the roads you travel upon,
leave traces of uplifting notes
whispers on a whim
through your poetic souls.

Celebrating young love....

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I hope you both like this, much love to you daughter dearest~

Peace to you and yours, shine on. Dad.

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    August 22, 2007

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    Heart to Heart Wishes

    No kinder wish as a gift could be given to an AP daughter and her AP beau....From a loving AP Father! You truly set the example by your life, and I know with your "wifie", and all the family...You are a man with a huge heart! Wish there were more of them...They right now seem to be almost extinct..By your example, you are changing that.....A wonderful write!


  • penman gold member
    August 20, 2007
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    Excellent

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest


  • oldphotosonlybringt
    August 18, 2007

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    Hay dad wow thanks for sucks a lovely poem, i loved it bunches i love it every time i read your wrights all my love..xoxoxox


    • poeticweaver gold member
      August 19, 2007
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      awe

      you are very welcome, and I hope you both enjoy..peace, and much love always.. dad.


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    August 17, 2007

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    Left me hanging on every word I just know she will adore it Thank you so much for sharing her with me


  • Jalalbad gold member
    August 16, 2007
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    a beautiful prayer

    for you daughter poeticweaver.
    Smile,
    Judy

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