These are two poems that I wrote under the name of ScorpioFlux. I don't know why I'm bringing these up to you all. But I was going through them and saw how I've changed, so I figured I would share them. This was before my present author name AngelDeAmor and after MyScorpioCurse. I wasn't as mad as in the begining with Curse, but still upset over everything and trying to find my style. I wasn't direct nor understood well. I've just now come to be calm and collected about my writing. I'm more concise now, and make more sense I think. I love my poetry from all my stages though. Thank you for reading anything of mine. I truely appreciate it.
http://allpoetry.com/poem/593320
http://allpoetry.com/poem/585331
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That bit of (subtle) "hopefulness" at the end was in fact my fav. part in your first... concluded it well! And in the second one: Wax Remains I liked "That neck on which I used to nip
Melted over your shoulders
Only a fifth of the way done
And I'm not sure
I can go through with it" the hesitation I could relate to maybe that's why that part caught my attention & then "Leaving a puddle of wax
As the fire's extinguished
It's done
And your gone
Now...
What to mould with your ashes" yah, the end again! Guess it's always good to simply "know" where you've been... the way we study world history... like what for? Well, to learn & not let stuff you don't want repeat itself i suppose... ^^ gl with everything! Glad you're happier now + will check into your other work soon!
+ Gracias por poner me en tus "favorites"... & btw, soy escorpio tambien y eso me fascina! lol
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Y sabes como somos los escorpios. Kool as hell. And it's not being conceited, if you're telling the truth. Hehe. We are that great. Humility is a hard thing for us to learn. And being left behind, or dumped is a hard thing for us to go through. I know it totaly threw my mind out of whack. But I've found out that people only run away, get mad, hate on us, or leave us because they fear us, or are intimidated by us. We are too much for normal people to handle. Other water signs can't cope, they can only flow with us. And earth signs are too bull headed, they don't like to hear the truth as we so bluntly, and brutaly tell it. Air signs aren't smart enough to mess with us, or understand us in the slightest bit. The fire signs are the only ones that can even come close to matching our passion, but they too get burned up by our heat. Being the best unfortunatly leaves us alone, or in a crappy relationship. Sorry... I got carried away talking about us escorpios. Hehe. But... yeah. Thanks for reading some of my poetry, and I hope to read more of yours. It's always great to meet another Scorpio. And even better, a beautiful female, part Latina Escorpio.
~Pedro~
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