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Blacker Still

 

So many moons

turn months,

to moths;

 

fluttering feebly

on lacelike wings.

 

Left stinging, singing

softer flares, of match lit flickers

 

burning, burning.

 

 

So many cares

turn stomachs,

churning;

 

lost in deeper sense of yearning,

 

plucked from nests

and screaming mothers,

 

clutched in vain to drier breasts.

Where milk is moldy

tears of bracken,

 

dripping on an ancient highway

 

blended in a bloodless flood;

going nowhere,

 

nowhere.

 

 

I hear the song of summers sorrow,

borrowed from the beast of Nether

 

touching me in silver tendrils,

 

daring contact,

missing reason.

 

Without such nerve of faith required,

 

to truly enter

inner steaming,

felt in veins

of deeper darkness,

 

calling, calling.

 

 

Blank breeze does whisper

names of seasons,

 

gleaned in greedy starlight stricken;

 

his face blows light in glowing neon,

candy cane reflections, waxen

 

turning him to something tasty,

for tongue to lick

 

as eerily edible.

 

 

His touch does linger,

swallowed fever, fearing entrance;

trusting not the path before him.

 

Fingers glow as pallid death,

in such selfish face of moon;

where taste does tingle

 

coffee black,

 

and blacker still

for time, as waiting.

 

 

I linger longer, colder grasp;

encircled in the arms of serpents.

Frigid skin upon this pallor,

pasting pigment on my soul.

 

 

One last look;

 

horizon's haste.

 

Wondering if lust's leeching sun

will ever wake,

 

from weary nightmare's barren waste.

 

Contemplating,

stone as petal, half remembered

 

dreaming, dreaming.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • DK akaLunaticSerene gold member
    August 24, 2007
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    Awesome job my so-similar friend congrats on the gold!


  • luckynsincere
    August 24, 2007

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    Wolfy,
    WOW! The very first line took me away. I felt you were brillant throughout this entire piece

    Such phrases as drier breast, moldy milk, and months to moths... wow... you knew what I wanted didn't you?

    Always,
    Mel


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    August 17, 2007

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    this is studendously pwoerful...although dark, it is precise and poignant... it is perfect, my goodness...on its very own.


  • omega13
    August 17, 2007

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    If this is all going on in your head then I'd really like to sit down and have a long conversation with you some time


  • Arkbear gold member
    August 16, 2007

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    Hmmmmmm.........

    .......nice metaphores.....however,

    a bit too much causing brain overload ~

     

    Like I told Tyler..

    ..inside a good metaphore, is a Great Poet,

    but inside simple words, is a Genius!

     

    Personally wolfy, I like your write, but I think you

    loaded your shotgun and blew the guts out of this write ~

    Our great Host may love it, but I am still fumbling through it,

    trying to figure out how to piece it together ~

     

    Good luck to ya ~

     

    Bear ~


  • Desire gold member
    August 16, 2007

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    Oy!!

    Wonderful weaving of words Sweet Soul
    I need to catch up I tell You
    Love the repetition for I felt the song Touch
    the Soul!
    Beautifully penned!

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~

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