Who wouldn't want to fall asleep
And wake up next to an angel
To be wrapped up in the arms
Of the man you love
When you kiss me
Nothing else matters
Your tight embrace
Protects me from the world
At night when I sleep
With your arms wrapped around me tight
I cant wait to wake up
Just to hear your voice
When I look into your eyes
I'm looking into the eyes
Of an angel
Heavon on Earth
A contest entry
- Let the Music Inspire You ~ Semi Quickie by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended August 16, 2007, 8 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I have mixed feelings about male angels.
But then you were not to know that. -
love make you feel everything and beyond what you penned here poet i think you did a excellent job with provided write here good luck in the contest
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Very well written and expressed take on the song.
Nicely done.
Thank you for entering the contest and good luck.
Storm -
Lol you spelled Heaven wrong
But its a beautiful poem, this is the one for chris right? He'll love it!! So sweet, but not over done, very real. Great flow, I like your free verse 
Lovely imagery here as well. And all around amazing poem here Dearest. Best of luck in this contest, the poem is well deserving!!!
Kelcey
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