Peaches and cream
with cafe o lait,
toffee banoffi
to finish...
add them together
and what have you got?
tummy filled up
like a big melting pot...
with smiles all around
such contentment
is found.
Author notes
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In a list
A contest entry
- PIF ~ Picture Inspired by ScarletO.
300 points, ended August 16, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is a very clever poem I smiled when I read it. I thin it should have been a gold. Well done I loved it!
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Thank you Jeff
Delighted that you enjoyed it 
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This is a tempting tasty treat of a poem which I've really enjoyed reading toffee banoffi would go down very well right now lol. Congrats on the trophy, I can see why this poem deserved to win it
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Thank you...yes, the smell of rich coffee and the whaft of warm pie has rather a pull Glad you enjoyed it, many thanks for your comments 
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Wow as always this is amazing and brilliant. Wonderful imagery and emotions Just wow
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Thank you Glad you enjoyed it
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I like this a lot it has such a nice atmosphere to it.
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Thank you
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