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Middle Aged Book

If I were in a fiction book
I would be in an adventure
I would walk and climb into a forest
were there would be creatures like no other
The birds would have 3 beaks
and 1 eye that would shine like the stars
Its silky and fluffy feathers would be as soft as a pillow

 

Inside the fiction book

I would find true love

The handsome Prince I loved would have heroic powers

and would save me from a fire breathing dragon

Then one day I  would marry this strong smart man

and his kiss would form me to a flying angel with powers

  


But being a fiction book can't be perfect though

Because  one day your husband would die

from fighting the evil wizard

and when he died my powers would be gone

eventually someone will kill the wizard 

But regular life is better cause you don't have any

evil wizards with magic powers

 

 

Author notes

9 year old girl
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  • Celticmoon
    September 30, 2007

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    Oh I like this! This is very creative I remember whe I was a little girl I wanted to live in these books too. Great job!


    Blessings
    Bel


  • twinkling of an eye
    September 20, 2007

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    This is very good! I like your use of similes and description. It painted a very vivid picture. Thanks for entering my contest!


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    September 1, 2007
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    This is just beautifully done and creative. I think you did a splendid job here.

  • BFLukas
    August 16, 2007
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    I like your poem and I thought it was funny

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