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The Law Of Karma

The law of man will never supersede the law of karma
an egg shell society afraid of blood stained hands
not allowing one to be put to sleep
taking the life of another.

Nothing seems to alter the murderous mind
remove this kind and relieve society
society has paid long enough
no need to feed cloth or house them


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option 1 "Egg Shell Society"

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  • Twins 4 me
    August 16, 2007
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    Nice write. I like the strong message in this. Thanks for entering!


  • delightfulmess silver member
    August 16, 2007

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    OOOH I like this message you sent us all.
    I am a firm believer in Karma.
    ~looks over shoulder~ just kidding.
    I have been good lately

    Great write and my Karma bring you everlasting happiness.


    delila


  • esroddo silver member
    August 16, 2007

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    I liked it very much

    Wonderful words well written, great take on the prompt. good luck LISA