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Break It Off

Bring it on,
bitch,
baby.
Blow me away,
bet
big.
Build it up,
break
barriers,
bring it.

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  • lingonberries
    August 17, 2007

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    Short, and pwerful! There is something special whit poems with single or few worded lines, and most of the time I reall like it! This is one of them! Good job!


  • Angel Wing Disease
    August 16, 2007

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    This is.. different.
    I liked how you used the "b" theme you have going on.
    Perhaps you could've gone a little further..
    Something, it just feels like this work is missing something.
    I enjoyed it nonetheless.
    Well done.


    xx.