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tell me

tell me who you are

tell me what you think,
we're all insane, so,
don't be afraid to speak

tell me what you see,
we're all blind, so,
clarify your views to me

tell me what you believe,
we're all conspiracists, so,
indulge upon your inquiries

tell me what you need,
we all have everything, yet
have nothing all at once

tell me a story,
where you were the heroine,
then,
tell me a story,
where you were the villain

tell me that you are scared
tell me that you do care
tell me everything
that makes you, you

Please tell me what you think

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  • Sinnastarr silver member
    November 17, 2007
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    This is a very good write. You presented your thoughts quite well here. There is a lot of emotion behind your words. I was hooked till the very last line.
    Well done Poet.
    Keep up the good writing.


  • leander Moderators member
    October 19, 2007

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    You have definately managed to write something that will let the minds of the readers ponder upon for some time
    I interpreted this as some kind of statement, where you say that everyone is unique in some way, and that we don't have to be afraid to show this - using the things we ran into during lifetime...

    Well written
    Leander


  • Touchof1der silver member
    October 17, 2007

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    Shhhh... I thought my insanity was a secret now you've done spread it all over the internet! Thank you for sharing your words with me and best wishes to you. Keep that quill dipped in ink and ever ready for use.
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • lost
    October 17, 2007
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    lol


  • nightqueenjenny
    August 20, 2007
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    this is so vividly open and poignant.. thanks for sharing a part of yourself to this world. I enjoyed reading this.

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