layers upon layers of religious beliefs
all to the source of mankind
in love we are joined
faithfully worship the creator of life
mercifully receptive to it's children
called by many names
the sick made well
the crippled made whole
show mercy receive mercy
forgive receive forgiveness
love receive love
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie 10/50/30 by penman.
525 points, ended August 16, 2007, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I liked how you took all of religion and made it a whole.
Then explained just what it's all about.
Very well done, I liked it.
Even though religious poems aren't my favorite,
I did like this.
xx. -
Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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This is a very nice take on the prompt.
show mercy receive mercy
forgive receive forgiveness
love receive love
Very well written.
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AWE...this was so perfect for that prompt.
WOW great job sweetie.
delila
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beautifully written and perfect for the prompt...
ANother wonderful write from you...
Lynda
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