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Perfect Schismatic Family

Perfection mirage often seems,
Equity protection needs.
Responsibility recedes
From cul-de-sac coercive streams.
Extrapolating god supreme
Church sectarian worry beads
To contention lead, strife breeds
Further strife, attracts extremes,
Advocates discriminative themes.
Much dogma self-defeats, or feeds
Irrationality.  Who reads
Life’s conformist pressures, narrow schemes,
Yearns for alternatives, free dreams.

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  • penman gold member
    August 16, 2007
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Noah20Tymatal
    August 16, 2007
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    Great write on the chosen prompt and your perfect family acrostic. Return the favor?