The star,
Pulling against the midnight sky
I don't even think to wonder why
As it glimmers in my eye
The feeling,
Like a fight for life or death
As it moves I see it's breath
As it rises into depth
I fall,
Like sky away from dark
Forming music for the lark
That will brand you with my mark
A kiss,
Softly crushing all desire
Are you afraid to feel the fire?
Taste the lips of a liar
The word,
Dare not speak it aloud
As it brings a fresh storm cloud
Obscuring all around
Love me?
Why say that filthy word?
As you cradle the absurd
She flies away like she's a bird
The punishment,
Fall onto the midnight sky
Just a glimmer in my eye
He should have never told that lie
He's a star now...
Author notes
This is what leftover rice at midnight does to me...
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- The Midnight Sky Of Love. by Poetryintheblood.
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Thank you for your most beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Excellent !!!
You are a very Talented Young Lady !!--I enjoy your writing style--You have a lot to say and you say it well!!
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Hey Guys
Hey AWESOME POEM! Hey Naz! -
Oooooh
Tres bon!
Ma petit ammie!
Very good!
I loved this bit:
"Like a fight for life or death,
As it moves I see it's breath,
As it rises into depth,"
Great use of "depth" there!
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You sweetie...you are far too nice to me...Thank you muchly!
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