Visions
At night
Delight to fright.
Author notes
Hay(na)ku.Three line, six word poetry form. Line one, 1 word, line two, 2 words, line three, 3 words.No rhyme or syllable requirements or restrictions.
I like to pen short poetry forms.
In a list
A contest entry
- "What You Love" by FallenAngel09.
300 points, ended October 4, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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hey i liek this form i wil lhave to experience it
This was wonderful alot said in few words.
Power of the pen.
Best of luck to you
Tory -
I probably should have said in the beginning that I really have a little problem trying to undestand haiku, but I will judge this fairly. I did like it, especially the slight rhyming at the end, a very unusual thing for a haiku to do, and that was lovely for originality. Perhaps a little too short for my taste, but great for its own genre. I would like to say that you should state the form and why you chose the form in your author's comments because that is one of the rules. Great job and good luck
Your Host,
Tiphanie
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