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[ A small glassy orb ]




A small glassy orb
levitates into the sky
captured by the breeze.




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This is a haiku about a bubble, if you couldn't tell.

A contest entry

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  • NoWayJo
    August 20, 2007

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    Been a while since I've blown bubbles--(Though I did blow some at my daughter's wedding a few years back). Really great image of the bubble as it floats away caught in the breeze.

    Thank you so much for this entry to the contest!

    Jo


  • DecemberSun
    August 16, 2007
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    Bubbles! YAY!


  • Danneh
    August 16, 2007

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    Bubbles!

    Lovely ^^ This was really a unique piece.. Perhaps because we don't usually read about bubbles.. 'Specially not in Haiku form..

    <3'd it.

    -Danneh<3(Wants to blow bubbles now. )