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Love in a day

I loved you this morning
When we were the same
You said you'd love me
No matter what came
You said you'd follow
You'd always come to
But now I have realised
That's not quite true
You left me this morning
You walked out that door
Bags packed and ready
That coat you once wore
The one thing you kept
From your old bachelor life
No thought did you spare
For your newly wed wife
So what was wrong?
Wasn't I good enough for you?
Did you want blond or brunette?
Eyes green or blue?
But I'm not bothered
I don't care
Does it really matter
The colour of my hair?
You may have your woman
But my man's fit
I love him this evening
You lousy old ___!

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  • tawk gold member
    August 19, 2007

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    I am sorry I hope this did not really happen, but it is so funny! I love the last lines. So full of funny imagery. You made me laugh. Great write


    • skyblu
      August 21, 2007
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      No I didn't really happen, it was just a bit of a laugh. Thanks!