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Trajedi

Tragically beautiful rock muse, she died on the inside, before he died at all.

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  • Florida Sunshine
    August 16, 2007

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    Are you sure of the option? Option 1 is finish the thought:
    If you thought I cared I would had told you.... "Tragically beautiful rock muse, she died on the inside, before he died at all." ??? < is this what you wanted? Just checking to be sure... I think you meant a different option.... you may want to review the options~ I'll be happy to judge it to option 1 if you like~ but I don't think it fits to well... There are other options your welcome to choose... just let me know...

    Thanks so much for entering my contest~ as it stands by itself, the one liner is excellently said!