Upon one knee you knelt
as you reached for my left hand,
a ring you placed
on my trembling finger
and asked...
...share my world with me.
In a list
A contest entry
- GraphicOhaulics Only/ pay it forward by piccola.
700 points, ended August 20, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The words upon this page are a perfect match to the images in the border. Love, trust and sharing all can be felt and see here.
Keep the paint flowing!
Blessings
Bel
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i have to agree with bella below, very nice for a love or proposal background
be well and be blessed
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Simple elegance, very well done, love the subtle tones in this.
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Thanks, Sweetie.
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The simplicity of these words were made for the classic sincere proposal. Leave it a romantic poet to marry the two in this lovely presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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And leave it to a brilliant poet to leave such a gracious comment. Yours, Patricia
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This background is absoulutley gorgeous and the poem is really good. Great Job Pattyann!!
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Oh. That was so beautiful. You always write such touching poems. And the background was absolutely beautiful.
Write on!
~*~SP~*~
luv u mummie!
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Simple and beautiful. Nothing like a rose to say love,and this background definitely says love.
Good luck
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Thank you, Storm.
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Oh this is just lovely. romantic and soft...simple. I can see lots of people wanting to use this for love poetry. Maybe an anniversary even...
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Thank you, Bear. I found the roses and ring and figured I'd never use them. I almost threw them into my trash. Imagine using them anyway. Glad I saved them. Hugs, Patricia
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Simple, beautiful, and definitely romantic!
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Thank you.
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Such precious words whispered to the heart that cause it to beat at such a rapid pace.. I just love those photograph moments, where time, and the words spoken stand still. Such a wonderfully weaved piece of lovely poetry my friend. I wish you all the best within this contest, and all you do as well. Much love, light, and Peace~ Your friend, and fan, Timothy~ xo
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Thank you, Timothy. I was hoping to use this background soon.
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Forever
And lover was born that shall last forever
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Thank you, Bob.
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