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Vicious

abrupt change calls my name
i stand up quickly to respond
and my eyes swim
in a sea of colors
as my head spins
and my perception is black


i wake up some time later
ponder what happened
. . .
. . .
. . .
i hear the call again
and stand up quickly to respond


it's a vicious cycle.

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