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Giving Up

I am giving up on everything
Because you guys can't get along
Why do we do this everyday
The yelling and screaming
It hurts so deeply that
That this goes on everyday
As soon as you guys are up
We can hear you fighting
About such crap in this house
Why can't we just get along for once
We are a family and i want to stay that way
I never want to lose you guys
But you are pushing so hard
That I have had it forever
I can't do this anyone
You guys are making me sick
With all this fighting I hear
And about what because one got something
And you didn't, well deal
Because this is it
I am broken inside and torn apart
I don't even feel safe when i am home
Because of you guys
Please just try for once
To get Along so we can try again
To be a family that we should be
Because i love you guys
But i am starting to give up

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  • camus gold member
    November 17, 2007
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    I feel for you Emily-Rose. Your poem conveys the despair that anyone would feel who is torn by the pain of loved ones constantly bickering. There is a sense of pleading in this. I wish you lots of luck if it is based on reality and even if it isn't, I guess.