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Torture(Cinquain)

Torture
Leading me on
Saying I'm number one
While with others you're having fun
Hurting

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Mercury Rising
    August 15, 2007

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    A really excellent cinquain and a great take on the prompt. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering.

    David