Death is all around me,
Two funerals in 2 weeks,
More than I care to see,
I traveled 1600 miles
To travel 600 more
I was tired after the first
Even more tired now
It has been sheer torture
I pray that no-one dies
This week!
A contest entry
- Quickie Contest- Poems based on prompt: 'Sheer Torture' by Mercury Rising.
600 points, ended August 15, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Sure can feel the torture and stress. I pray that it gets relief, and hope energy and rest will come your way.
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Thank you Goalsv your a sweet heart. You always comment on my poems and seem to know just how true they are to my heart...... energy and rest will be great, I did get some good sleep tonight, so ahhh Im home.......
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ouch
i'm sorry, i hope things go better, another death would indeed be lunacy, i must say. a nice short write, i like this tyle. good, and good luck in the contest.
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This was a very good poem and worked well with the prompt. Thanks for entering my contest, and best of luck. I'm sorry to hear about your personal losses.
David
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another would be lunacy
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You got that right, Thanks for reading and your comment!
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I lost my Mother in law in june then my father in law in July,I so know where you are coming from.
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Im sorry to hear that.
so many people pass and we can only pray and do what we can. Bless you and keep the faith!
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That would do it for me, too...
Best of luck to you in this contest!!!
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