The glass slipper doesn't fit this one
This princess has a story
Tomorrow her life won't seem quite fit
For a happy ending that's not too gory
The silver ball gown lay in tatters
Forgotten somewhere in the end
A charred tiara lay in shammbles
In a dead and bloody hand
A childrens story fit for no one
This princess can't be saved
Some say it was her problem
But there's much left to debate
Prince Charming has gone missing
His princess lay on the floor
Some will say he's cheated
But the Ladies in Waiting know there's more
The pumpkin has gone missing
And Prince Charming holds the knife
Cinderella lay in a bloody mess
And the clock is ringing Midnight
Author notes
Fairytales rock!
I picked Cinderella
A contest entry
- Twisted Fairytales! Yay!!! Come in and see by LadyOfFate.
600 points, ended August 19, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow, a cinderella dies poem, kinda like my cinderella dies poem, but more story and different setting, still the prince kills her in this one just like in mine. Good luck and thanks for entering
PS. look at your page you missing fairytales rock -
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Haha thanks, I did have it but I completly had it in the wrong box!!!! But thanks
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niiiiiice! i never liked cinderella... this is great! so dark, and leaves me wanting more!
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loved it
ooh this is a greusome on but so very nice... and twisted. i really liked it it wasn't too long and it had just the right imagery.
overall loved it and i wish you luck in the contest
~lostelvenchild
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