SHIT!
IT'S HOT!!
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WELL, IT IS SHEER TORTURE OVER HERE!!!
It has been a hot-ass, dog-days,
drag-ass, fricking-hot summer out
here in Victorville, California -
the 'high desert' - also known as
the one and only Mojave Desert!!!
Having been born & raised in Michigan,
I'm having a hard time dealing with the
HOT-HOT-HOT climate... my male-mate is
a real sweet-heart though; he wets his
handkerchiefs & ties them around my neck
to keep me cool - so I won't stroke...
A contest entry
- Quickie Contest- Poems based on prompt: 'Sheer Torture' by Mercury Rising.
600 points, ended August 15, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments?
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I'm not very well versed in this business, but it seems that the "shit" and the "it's" are kind of forced!
LOL
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Shit , Its hot...lvoe that one. Simple and so easy to understand! Nice HM to contribute to it as well. ~Sie
getting caught up today with everyones writes! lol
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Ha ha ha ha ha !!
I am not one bit surprised you got a trophy for this one. i laughed my ass off Sis!
Great job.
I only wish you would send some of this weather here to Ireland, we have been soaked out this summer Auh!
Slán Dolores xx
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Glad you like this one, Sis!!!
And if I could, I would send you some of these desert-rays in a heartbeat... Sorry to hear you've been soaked over there... Wouldn't the world be a nicer place to live with our weather doing exactly what we wish - the perfectly needed services for each locale!!!
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lovely poetry, such depth and thought to these verses, it is rare to find such quality on the AP site...PK
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Certainly qualifies for sheer torture!
I hate it when it's hot. I get all cranky. 
Cool poem, though! 
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Thank you!!!
Glad you enjoyed my silly lil' poem!!!
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this is GOOD
SHIT! lol I love it and its soooo true!!!!!
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Thank you!!!
It has been a hot-ass, dog-days,
drag-ass, fricking-hot summer out
here in Victorville, California -
the 'high desert' - also known as
the one and only Mojave Desert!!!
I really appreciate the kudos!!!
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Thank you!!!
It has been a hot-ass, dog-days,
drag-ass, fricking-hot summer out
here in Victorville, California -
the 'high desert' - also known as
the one and only Mojave Desert!!!
I really appreciate the kudos!!!
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lol
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Thank you!!!
It has been a hot-ass, dog-days,
drag-ass, fricking-hot summer out
here in Victorville, California -
the 'high desert' - also known as
the one and only Mojave Desert!!!
I really appreciate the kudos!!!
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Short and to the point. Thanks for entering. This must have taken a lot of work.
David
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LOL!!! Love it!! Love it! Short...and straight to the point! Heat can do that to you. Really enjoyed your masterpiece! Thanks for sharing this. Good luck in the contest!
....JustBreathe
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Thank you!!!
It has been a hot-ass, dog-days,
drag-ass, fricking-hot summer out
here in Victorville, California -
the 'high desert' - also known as
the one and only Mojave Desert!!!
I really appreciate the kudos!!!
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well.
that was abrupt.. i started laughing when it all sunk in, though. very nice, very nice.
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Thank You!!!
It has been a hot-ass, dog-days,
drag-ass, fricking-hot summer out
here in Victorville, California -
the 'high desert' - also known as
the one and only Mojave Desert!!!
I really appreciate the kudos!!!
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