If i had a baby pig
called a piglet
i would spoil it as much as i could
though ppl may say i am crazy but it would be my pet
If i had a pig
the whole world of my house would change
cause you know they are a bit dirty
but i would wash it every day with tangerine soap
if i could choose between a piglet and a pig
you know i would choose a piglet
i would dress it up in cute clothes
and of course i would get a girl
she could be the sister i always wanted
if i had a boy
he would be such a punk
and whenever i go swimming i would bring him with me
and have him wear a swimming trunk
whether if i had a pig a piglet
or i had a boy or a girl
pets will be pets
and pets do hurl
A contest entry
- Pot Belly Sweetness. by Poetryintheblood.
350 points, ended August 18, 2007, 2 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Lol did it make any sense? Plz tell me all opinions
Comments
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Cute poem. I loved it. In line 4, write out the word "people".
Keep up the good work.
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A very well written entertaining poem. I'd definately choose the piglet over the pig too. Congratulations on your gold trophy!
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aww ty! i am so blessed to win a gold trophy for the first time so i suppose i can start writing more and make my dreams succeed so ty!
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Lol, this is so cute, and you know what I'd do the same, wait till my son gets this pig Lol, I'll be dressing her up to thank you for your sweet entry, Josephine
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omg i am so happy for getting a gold trophy for the first time and the idea of writing this poem like this just shot up in my head and i grinned and was like this is gonna be a winner and then i said to myself well.... i thought alot of my contest poems are winners and i only ended up with one bronze trophy and now i have a gold one too!!! Thank u so so much. And like i said to heavens child i am so very blessed to have it too.
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