Reaching into the steaming hot,
red and white bucket,
fingers became moist.
Warm sensations of slippery, saucey
honey seduced my every digit.
Removing my hand slowly,
they cooled against the air.
Hands full of hot, thick meat,
I lifted to my lips and I bit!
Licking the saucey KFC from my fingers.
Author notes
Prompt:
Hand Sanitizer
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A contest entry
- PIF 10/15/30 by blind alley.
430 points, ended August 15, 2007, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Silver Winning Poems by Amaranthine Lover.
545 points, ended August 23, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable winner
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though its clear what you are talking about this poem could and can go to a whole another level and i love it
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hot and sexy thanks for the smoking hot entry!
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Very clever. You tricked me. LOL With the extent of your eroticism, you know what I thought. Good luck in the contest.
Renee
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Simply LOL. In the beginning, I thought you were writing something erotic until I got to your last line. I loved how you built it up, and when the reader least expects it, your passion comes tumbling down to a tasty drumstick. Lovely.
I-Araxie-I
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Prompt: Hand Sanitizer
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