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A Vampire's Tale

Warm, delicious, tempting deep red
My throat ached, longing for blood
I couldn’t bear to see your limp head
As you died, and you left me forever
My tears became a flood

Why did you have to be there?
We were alone, and it was dark out
It smelled so good, your long dark hair
That alley was not a place for you
Everyone in town heard my shout

If only I had hunted yesterday
The pain would have been much less
I didn’t have to kill, I could go another way
Your scent was horribly magnificent
Why, I cannot guess

I hated being a bloodsucker, a vampire
For decades, I had resisted
But your scent burned me like fire
I gave in, and my instincts took over
So many reasons I had listed

Reasons not to drink human blood
It made me even more of a monster
Your cheeks pooled with blood, red as a rosebud
Who were you to torture me like this?
I wanted it so badly I ignored what you were

Whether you were human or animal
I really didn’t care
I won’t object if you think me worse than a cannibal
Then everything changed fast as the wind
With a single gust of fresh air

I could finally think reasonably again
I probably should have been glad
Precipitation was absent, I was lucky there was no rain
Decades of effort had kept me from the blood of humans
Ruining it now would be far beyond just bad

I think it was your eyes that saved me
Wide, innocent, unknowing, and afraid
They made me feel guilty, and sorry
You rescued me from the monster that was myself
I wouldn’t drink your blood then, no matter what anyone said

Every day now I wonder
What your blood would have tasted like
For this, let me be struck by lightning and deafened by thunder
Believe me, I do NOT regret not drinking your blood
I’m sorry if that’s what it sounded like

It might not be likely, but still
I think some day we’ll meet again
My hope can’t be squashed, it has a firm will
I can’t blame you if you hate me
But I hope when we meet, you’ll think of me as a friend

Author notes

I decided to write this poem because I was inspired by several characters from the Twilight books, and, of course, Stephenie Meyer, the amazing author of the books Twilight, New Moon, and Eclipse.

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Comments

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  • Lover of Stories
    August 21, 2007
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    Thanks neatsa, I'm going to your page now


  • bar room stool
    August 20, 2007
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    this was amzing. i have a vampier poem to if you like them. they are on my page it's cold "luck of the draw (what's the odd's in that)" you cna take a look if you wont. but this was an amzing poem!

  • Lover of Stories
    August 17, 2007
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    Thanks imacrazyface


  • Sanity-Day10
    August 16, 2007
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    Forgot these


  • Sanity-Day10
    August 16, 2007

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    I've never read the books these are based off of but you wrote this well, I love the content in it, it is kind of a conflict but hope prevails in the end.

  • Lover of Stories
    August 16, 2007
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    Thank you, sugar


  • Immortal Shadow
    August 16, 2007

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    It is dark but light at the same time. I really liked it. Keep writing. One day I bet it will pay off.

    ~sugar~

  • Lover of Stories
    August 16, 2007
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    Thanks, Wayne ; )


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    August 16, 2007

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    Brilliant

    Stunning, dark and deep and very very good. The imagery is outstanding. Keep writing, this is so good.

    All the best
    Wayne
    x

  • Lover of Stories
    August 16, 2007
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    Thank you, Gloria : )


  • Nostalgia
    August 15, 2007
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    Wow. That was interesting and origanal...*My spelling isn't great* anyway, keep up the good work!

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