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Any second now...


butterflies dancing,
twirling across tingling skin
fingertips drumming the beat
along the inside of your thigh
and I ponder how long...?
when will the rush of heat flush pink
and urging cease?
whispers of desire,
long held in secret stashes
unleashed for an out of control moment
peaked, pointed; 
heady scents fill this scarlet room
and I continue to wonder
when will you come...?



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it was suggested i write something romantic... i'm a bit rushty...

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 28, 2007

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    and I continue to wonder
    when will you come...?

    Humm I can see the muse in the pose of the dancing for love and its magic is seen in the heartwarming words of the poem here..well done..and thanks for such a warm entry in my contest...


  • heygoo
    August 15, 2007
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    Bawdy and sensual at the same time. Nice take on the question prompt. I enjoyed very much.

    • Thedragonisgone
      August 15, 2007
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      heygoo

      i had to look bawdy up - all i could think of was naughty.. : )
      thank you.