Devious and delicious, three devilish delights,
Eager to make your pleasures tonight.
Vivacious blonde, red-head, brunette
Intrigue your thoughts, make you sweat.
Lips parched, they offer a taste of honey,
Smooth as silk, each dop flows free.
Angelic enticement, spread for your view,
Nevermind when their claws sink into you.
Gratifying, they take you to heaven and back,
Endlessly sucking your cock and sac.
Lusty bitches, when horns start to show,
Sent by the devil, to give you a blow.
Author notes
Move over Charlie, the Devil's Angels are in town!
Who knows, I'm in a wierd mood.
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A contest entry
- Adult only (10 + lines) (18+ please) by Riftkin.
600 points, ended August 15, 2007, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I thought this was really good. A very interesting storyline, the Devil's Angels, is exciting, well written, has nice flow and I thought it had good imagery, as well. You could easily picture the Devil's Angels without the picture you posted above.
You did BADLY spell something wrong, though. You meant to spell DELICIOUS in line 1, but you spelled it DELISCIOUS, unless it's some kind of new language that you're trying to popularize...ha, ha.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! -
I love this
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What a picture this paints in a partial twisted mind. You are the devil. I like that.
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