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My Prayer

 

 

A prayer is said
to a listening God
and in his mercy
he sees all;

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A crying child
with bowed head
promises all to
save her dad;

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The spirit floats
within them both
and comforts all,
the almighty host;

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As faith is tested
day by day, an angel
guards this prayer
with love;

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With spoken words
and heartfelt love
we pray the Lord,
on high, above to
grant a wish so
deeply held
to keep this daughter's
parent well.

 

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  • Kim6
    February 7, 2008
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    Nice


  • getsbetter
    August 30, 2007

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    Another absolutely beautiful prayer for Lilac and her father. Thank you sweet friend for your kinds words, she will love them...GETS


  • Candy6
    August 30, 2007
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    Sweet heartfelt prayer poem.

    • cutiepie gold member
      August 30, 2007
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      Thank you Maggie for directing me back to this poem, as I noticed an error Glad you enjoyed it though Many thanks


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    August 19, 2007
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    A beautiful poem and prayer.


    • cutiepie gold member
      August 20, 2007
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      Thank you , I am delighted that you enjoyed it


  • Cannonsfire
    August 15, 2007
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    So simple and yet the words are moving and heartgfelt. I am sure she will love this. Love, C

    • cutiepie gold member
      August 16, 2007
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      I find simplicity fits the bill when talking to God He is all seeing, all knowing, so why embellish Many thanks for your kindness

  • darrylblacksr
    August 15, 2007

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    What a beautfiul prayer, Yes may god grant her wish and bless her and her parents through his loving kindness and mercy. Thanks for sharing this prayer with me and god bless you in the contest...

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