the bells chimed
as clouds of silver
danced in fairy dust
girls in pink frilly dresses
boys in handsome clothing
but one whimpered
in the muddy hallow
fairies circled his head
lifting him into the air
people astounded at the sight
fell to there knees
now full of mud they turned into pigs
the boy of poor fate giggled
silly they all looked in Sunday best
and pig snouts
the fairies carried him off
to a candy park filled with joy
when the boy awoke
the very next day
his parents were of wealth
the end
A contest entry
- Twisted Fairytales! Yay!!! Come in and see by LadyOfFate.
600 points, ended August 19, 2007, 18 entries
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Comments
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which fairytale is this a twist of? and where is the fairytales rock in the notes??? it is nicely written but please explain.
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a pretty fairy take kat....worthy of a tropht this one ,,best wishes
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